second char

Name: Jeff Hulley
Actual Age: 18
How old they look: 21
Race/Creature Type:human
Country of Origin: Netherlands
Height: 6'4
Body type: He is tall and skinny
Skin tone: He is pale since in the netherlands he didn't get the sun very much.
Eyes: He has blue eyes
Hair: He has blonde hair that is cut short
Appearance: He wears a plain shirt that has different colors every day. He usually is very clean. He has a scar down his right arm. He always wears a necklace with a medic sign at the bottom. He doesn't brush his hair to often because he doesn't. But it usually stays the way he wakes up with it. He has a small nose and ears that stick out.(Are unattached at the back.) He sometimes wears a insulated coat on rainy days and cold days.
Personality: He tries to be as clean as possible. He doesn't like to fight much because he bruises easily wich makes him look dirty. He likes to be very social.
Diet: He eats mostly eats cheese,bread,meat, and potatoes.
Talents: He is a great sailor and medic.
Flaws: He is a little shy most of the time. He has a phobia of dirt.does not do well under a lot of pressure.(Like a life and death situation.)
Powers/Magic (if any): None
Weaknesses: He doesn't fight back much.He trips a lot from being tall.
Weapon(s): One small dagger hidden in his shoe.
Job in the Kingdom: He is a medic and sometimes goes along with boat rides to help there.
History: One day he was given a job to travel with a well known ship. He accepted and the next day he went aboard and they sailed away from the Netherlands. It was a long journey to him until they got near the British territories, when a huge storm hit. The boat was almost completely destroyed. He jumped ship and went along on the small boat to land. They gave him a horse and some supplies then traveled city to city. He finally came upon Albion. He liked how strange the people were and decided to stay for a month. It ended up him living there since he had no family back in the netherlands.

RP example: I walked onto deck feeling a little queasy. "Hmm." I said to myself watching some of the sailors sitting around. I started to walk to the captains cabin to go report that. But before I could get half way there one of the sailors yelled at me "Where do you think your goin." he said getting with his fellow sailors. i stopped in my place and stared at them studying them. They were all in there well twenties and very muscular. "Um...Back to da infirmary." I suggested. "Yes...Deres an idea." one of them shot back with a Dutch accent I knew very well. "Yea I guess." I said backing up to the door to the floor downward. They all moved together closer to me. In the corner of my eye, I saw the captain and turned to him and yelled "Hey captain." And started running in his direction as the other sailors walked away.

Notes:Has a dutch accent and is dutch. (Example: The=Da. Then when the word ends with TH it sounds like:Math=mass. sentence: Dat vampire was Da one that bit my Dad.)

Correct your race/ethnicity and description of creature parts.
What on earth does. "Dominent. has many behavior actions" meam?

Edited. I think.

You've interchanged the two!
How is description of creature, "dutch"

Race/Creature Type: Dutch,human

Dutch isn't in the description


Description of Creature: Many races. No powers. Each human acts differently as in eating,reactions,fighting..etc

It sgouldnt be in creature type either. Dutch is not a creature -.-

EdItEd

Remove "Description of creature", you dont need it if he's completely human.

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Put in a little more detail under "Appearance". What are his features like? Does he have any scars birthmarks? Any particular way he likes to groom himself..that sort of thing. 3-4 lines more.

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What do you by "unnattached at the back"?

peoples ears are either attached totally and don't stick out or they have ears that stick out..wich is called unattached ear.

Oh okay.
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